Thursday, October 16, 2008

Almost...

The Obama Blueprint for Change is nicely designed for the most part; however, the intro pull quotes  are filled with the most heinous hyphenation, including this partial widow. How did they spend so much time on the piece as a whole and then not tend to the details?

2 comments:

the larsons said...

The document is also a great argument for why it's easy to get lost in the gray. Couldn't we see a logo or campaign button somewhere in there? Jeesh.

Anonymous said...

Lel at your double space.